托物抒情:我们心中的美-TheBeautyinOurMind,托物抒情:我们心
托物抒情:我们心中的美-The Beauty in Our Mind
我们心中的美
【内容提示】
你是一个高中一年级学生。从初中二年级起，你们就学开了美术。通过学习，你们懂得了什么是美。你们把教室布置得整洁美观，你们班每个同学都办有自己的报纸，各有其名。它们是同学之间互相交流、同学与老师交流感情的桥梁。有人说，中学生的生活是枯燥的，但你认为，有了美，生活就一点也不枯燥，而是丰富多彩的、有趣的。以“我们心中的美”为题写一篇文章。
【作文示范】
The Beauty in Our Mind
I am a middle school student. People often say that the middle school students' lives are very dull. But I think it is wrong. Our lives are very rich and interesting.
My teacher has taught us art education since we were in Junior Grade Two. Now we have learned it for three years. By learning it, we understand what is real beauty and we know something about the art of Ansient Greece① and how to appreciate② it. Then we made our classroom and our minds beautiful with the knowledge of aesthetics③ that we have learned.
On the left wall of our classroom there are two pieces of paper on which are written famous proverbs. On the right wall there are two pictures. And on one side of the blackboard is our bookcase④. There is a statue of Beethoven on it and we have all kinds of newspapers and magazines in the bookcase. At noon, if you come to our classroom, you can find many of us reading newspapers and magazines or listening to famous music of the world.
We have each a little newspaper. We give them lovely names: Little Grass, Sailing Boat, A Flower with Seven Colours …. Each of us likes running his own newspaper. We put our hearts into it. They are our good friends. And they are also a bridge between us pupils and our teachers. And they are also our exercise-books and composition-books. We write in our newspapers our good wishes, our splendid ideas, our carefully-written compositions, little poems and stories which are written in English by ourselves. And we often write down what we have learned.
In this way we make our lives rich and colourful. All of us love our class, our teachers and our lives.
We know Rome was not built in a day⑤. In order to become a good student, we should study even harder and master much more knowledge. We know knowledge is power, which makes us strong and our minds beautiful.
My dear friend, don't you think our lives are very rich? Do you like our lives?
【词语解释】
①Ancient Greece ['einM nt gri:s] 古希腊
②appreciate [ 'pri:Mieit] v．欣赏；鉴赏
③aesthetics [i:s'Ietiks] n．美学
④bookcase ['bukkeis] n．书橱
⑤Rome was not built in a day.[谚]罗马非朝夕建成。（或：[喻]伟业非一日之功。或：坚持必成。）
【写法指要】
本文作者把自己对生活、对班级和对老师的热爱之情寄托于物的美：装扮的教室美和小小的报纸的美。这说明了作者选材的巧妙和构思的奇巧。同时，作者通过对自已班级、教室、小报的描写还批驳了那些认为中学生生活枯燥的错误思想。从此我们可以看出，学生生活的枯燥与有趣一是要看学生如何看待生活，二是要看教师如何去引导学生。教师从美育的角度去引导学生就会使学生的生活丰富多彩。
托物抒情:我们心中的美-The Beauty in Our Mind