Mysummerholiday
i plan to go to taiwan for my summer holiday. taiwan is the largest island in china. and very beautiful. the weather is nearly the same as that in fuzhou. sometimes it is very hot in summer. i visit interesting places. taiwan is famous for mount ali and riyuetan. and there are famous springs there.
it is really interesting and exciting to taiwan. i hope i will have a great time there. i can’t wait to fly there.
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1. and very beautiful. 改为 and it is very beautiful.
2. i visit interesting places. 改为i am going to visit some interesting places.
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