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Childhood Is the Most Wonderful Part of Life
The day before yesterday was Children's Day. When I was wandering in the street, I saw many lovely children playing with their parents. The pleasant scene reminded me of my own childhood. When I was a little girl, I was free from worries and did whatever I liked. I was full of vigor and learned a lot of things from the world. I did many exercises and was much healthier than I am today. In my opinion, childhood is the most wonderful part of life.
First of all, children was deeply loved and protected by their parents. They do not need to worry about anything and can do whatever they want to. I think this is the most wonderful advantage of childhood. When a person grows up, he or she will never have this kind of advantage again, for an adult is supposed to have received enough education and know what he/she should do and what not. Thus, adults can only do everything they should do whether they like it or not. Moreover,the more they learn about the world, the more worries they will get. Thus, many adults wish they would be children once more.
Secondly, children can learn much more than adults. When babies come to this world, they know nothing and have a great thirst for knowledge. It is much easier to educate them than to teach adults just like a piece of blank paper is much easier to be painted on. Furthermore, children learn by observing how people around them act and imitate them. While adults emphasize too much on the ways of learning, they do not learn in best ways in most cases. Obviously, children have better memories than adults. This can also explain why children learn more things.
Thirdly, children are brought up under the great care of their parents. They eat all kinds of nutritious food, and they are taken out to do physical exercises regularly. Thus, they are very healthy. However, adults have their own opinions on food and only eat their favorite food. They do not take in all kinds of nutrients. Also, adults are busy with their work. When they go back home, they always feel very tired and are unwilling to do anything else except sleeping. Thus, they have little time to do exercises. No wonder adults are not so healthy as children.
I will always remember the days of my childhood. How I wish I could be as carefree and curious as a child once again, and relive those happy days!
简 评
童年的生活没有过多的束缚，无忧无虑；童年的世界多么新奇，点燃了无限的好奇心和求知欲；孩子们生气勃勃，健康快乐。作者列举了童年的种种好处，并归纳道：童年是一生中最美好的时光。
文章主题明确，结构整齐，分析有条理。但论证过程中缺少事实论据支撑，作者如果能够融入一些自己的亲身经历和真情实感，将更容易引起读者的共鸣，增添文章的可读性。文章语言平实，但语句不够精炼，表达也欠生动。
(点评教师：辛红叶)
Childhood Is the Most Wonderful Part of Life