改变爱的方式TheWayLoveChange
The Way Love Change
I searched in memory and at last found myself surprised at what was brought back. Here is what I used to be. Once, I was simply a creature of schedules. That means I was so well planned a girl that I was entirely loyal to everything arranged.Every day you caught me as busy as a diligent ant and it was true that I actually enjoy the full and colorful life led which in other＇s eyes was utterly a dull and routine mode. I would not make any compromises to change the plans plans about study, plans about future, and plans about love.
To some degree, I deliberately avoided being hit by the current of love for fear that it might destroy my perfectly planned life. I did not expect its arrival. I didn＇t expect its power so magic and influential. And I certainly didn＇t expect its coming accompanied with the purest feelings of blessing.
Tall, straight and shining that is my boyfriend. That was the way he came to me: "How do you do? We are from the same high school. I am two grades senior,do you know?" He greeted me in a confident and gentle manner, and his hairstyle impressed me deeply.
Later on, the life pattern which I strictly stick to has been gradually affected by his moving behaviors. None of a day will I find him absent from waiting outside my dorm to pick me up to classroom. None of a night will end without our heated and joyful chat. Gradually, I was incredibly thrown to cultivate a fresh view on the surroundings which didn＇t seem as burdening as expetted. I began to adjust myself to enjoy the peaceful pace of life.
And so it goes, the sweet, joyful and romantic freshman year, a year with love that changed my way to live.
简 评
一篇温馨感人的文章。作者体会了爱情的魔力，尝到了爱情的甜美感人。作者以女孩特有的细腻笔调向我们娓娓道述了自己感情的变化与波动，让我们分享了她的甜蜜。
本文结构清晰，表达流畅，但在句子的用词结构上有些地方仍有待提高与改进，但总体来说瑕不掩瑜。