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today is march 28th, my mother’s birthday. today is also sunday. i wanted to make her happy. i gave her a special present. i helped her do some chores and made her have rest all day. i sweep the floor and did the dishes. i also made meal for my mother. that tasted good. my mother was very happy and she told me with tears in her eyes: “ you’re a good kid!” i was very happy too.
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1. i sweep the floor and did the dishes. 改为 i swept the floor and did the dishes.
2. i also made meal for my mother改为i also made meals for my mother
3.描述作者母亲生日那天给她的礼物，替母亲干家务，字里行间透出对母亲的爱。