春游-ASpringOuting
A Spring Outing
Spring came with all its glories. The new grass exposed its green colour. The pretty flowers opened their blossoms.We were tempted to go for an outing.
It was Sunday, the 20th of April. We set out very early on bikes, carrying bottles of champagne, beer and bags of cakes, bacon and cooked eggs. We rode along the winding paths in the fields, across the meadows and down the roads.The willow were fresh and green. The swallows were flying to and fro, up and down the sky. The birds, like musicians,snang their melodious songs in the trees, and the butterflies,like colorful dancers, were fluttering here and there. We breathed the fresh air deeply and laughed heartily.
At 10 a.m. we arrived at the foot of the $hushan Hill.We left our bikes with a bike-repairing shop and began to climb up the Hill. Near the top, under a big tree with luxuriant foliage we had our picnic. We drank and ate, talked and laughed. After the picnic we stood in the breeze with our hands on our waists, enjoying the fine landscape. Then we lay on the grass talking about our life and studies.
At about 4 p. m. , we returned with balmy greenness on our backs and freshness in our hearts.
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这篇记叙文除了叙述清楚了时间、地点、人物和事件外，还对春天的美景作了一番描述，而这美妙的一切正是他们去春游的原因，因此也就引出他们去春游的结果。文章构思巧妙，语言简洁而充满诗情画意。只是篇幅稍长。考试时由于时间所限，构思时一定要把握住文章的长度。
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春游
春天来了，带着无限的娇美。小草，已露出嫩绿色，花已开放了，我们怎么能不去郊游!
那是4月20号，星期天。一大早，我们带着香槟酒、啤酒、蛋糕、咸薰肉和鸡蛋，骑着自行车出发了!我们沿着乡间弯弯曲曲小道，穿过草地走向大道。嫩绿的杨柳挂在路旁，燕子在天空飞来飞去，鸟儿在树上歌唱，彩蝶到处飞舞。我们深深地呼吸着新鲜的空气，尽情地放声大笑。
上午10点钟，我们到达墅山脚下。我们将自行车寄放在一家自行车修理铺，然后开始爬山。我们在靠近山顶，一棵茂密的大树下坐下来开始野餐。我们慢慢地吃着，喝着，说着，笑着。野餐后，我们双手叉腰，站立在微风中，享受着美丽的景色。随后我们躺在草地上，谈论着我们的生活和学习。
大约在下午4点我们带着芬芳的绿色，心中装着清新，精神抖擞踏上返回的征途。